https://youtu.be/QVoczyIbgmk
After reviewing the feedback from my previous video I decided I needed to be more dynamic and dress myself better. So for this video I put on a jacket and made sure to be more dynamic. I also thought that my last elevator speech ran a little long so I trimmed this one down a bit. I think this elevator pitch is very good and I hope I can continue to improve on it.
Hi James,
ReplyDeleteThis elevator pitch was very entertaining. You kept it short and sweet, and did not mess around with any random filler information. I think you related to the audience very well by asking them rhetorical questions, and then sharing your own personal experiences with rain on campus. You also had great hand movements and gestures, which helped illustrate the points you were making. Overall, great job.
Hey James, I think you did a great job with this pitch. The point of it the elevator pitch is to get your point across in a brief but effective way. This you executed really well. You had passion with it and I think that it was well done. The gestures went with the speech really well. You did a good job of keeping it at a level where the people could relate to your business idea. This is very important so the crowd feels that they are on board with your idea.
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