Hey James! I really liked your first elevator pitch. I have noticed in both yours and the other person's I have reviewed that there isn't any mention of actual statistics. I have noticed this is not in my own elevator pitch, too. After watching this week's lectures, I noticed that numbers can really grab a person's attention and make your idea more creditable if you include factual statistics. I think if you did more research, like a ratio of people forgetting their umbrellas, it would help your idea be more concise. Other than that, I think you had a well thought out pitch!
Hey James! I really liked your first elevator pitch. I have noticed in both yours and the other person's I have reviewed that there isn't any mention of actual statistics. I have noticed this is not in my own elevator pitch, too. After watching this week's lectures, I noticed that numbers can really grab a person's attention and make your idea more creditable if you include factual statistics. I think if you did more research, like a ratio of people forgetting their umbrellas, it would help your idea be more concise. Other than that, I think you had a well thought out pitch!
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